The Choice Poem by Kranthi Pothineni

The Choice

Rating: 5.0


Once again the sun burned
One more new day started
To make me older by a day
But this new day is not so

I raised from bed with surprise
To find I'm away from home
And to find I slept on street
Where I used to play my ball

I got up and started to run
My jogging to home is hard
The images on path are sad
And all streets are looking bad

The place I buy food is nude
Place I meet friends also ends
And my home merged in loam
Along with my beat and blood

My cry is loud in the crowed
Misery smiled on us like wild
But inner voice made a choice
And made my left hand to ink

To ink about all our boats sink
In waters of deep blue and flu
Were we had to swim and cure
Both the worlds of his and you

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Joseph Poewhit 26 January 2010

Like does take changes

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Marieta Maglas 29 January 2010

nice simile Misery smiled on us like wild nice confessive poem, touching 10/10

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Eyan Desir 28 January 2010

good write well express 10

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Anju Addanki 27 January 2010

its s good poem and some lines are really very finely writeen.

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 27 January 2010

it made me rate it 10

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Antonio Liao 27 January 2010

Like walking in the rainbow...it’s free and real...but could I do...'a Choice that nobody can do for you'....and only your great faith has the chance to reach.... an awesome for reflection....God bless...10 +++++

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