The Castle Poem by David Semenske

The Castle

Rating: 3.9


As i walk through these ruins
From a land long ago
My inquisitive mindwanders
To and Fro

If these walls could talk
The stories they could tell
Of times so good and not so well

Of plans and schemes
to replace kings and queens
of battles long ago

Of marriages of convience
Or forbidden romance
Under a mistletoe

Mans need of greed
with Power as its seed
As they waited for their hour

for fortune and fame
Playing a dangerous political game
the defeated had to go

To the dungeons for treason
what was the real reason
for going down below



unwritten history
That makes the story a mystery
Things they didn't want us to know



For history is a mystery
written for the victor
So we will never know

Oh, if these walls could talk

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Inspired by a facebook Friend who visited Petra.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Godfrey Morris 09 June 2015

Awesome write. Some great thoughts.

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Dr Antony Theodore 26 May 2017

unwritten history That makes the story a mystery Things they didn't want us to know yesssssss history is a mystery written for the victor i liked this last very much. how very true. you have a powerful observation and you percieve things which normally no one thinks. thankyou dear poet. tony

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Unwritten Soul 16 August 2016

Oh the poem really is a beautiful work that you should proud to say a tribute to Petra, the mystery city in Jordan

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Liza Sudina 20 November 2015

If these walls could talk -But all th information is inside your heart! Lovely poem! ! And nice video - I liked Napoleon and a girl in green most!

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Roseann Shawiak 03 August 2015

Love the last two verses, your words make so much sense! Great, enticing thoughts, making me think. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Valsa George 09 June 2015

Great write! If the ruins could speak, definitely we would hear a different story!

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David Semenske

David Semenske

Milwaukee, Wi
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