The Candy Bar Poem by Leah Michele
The Candy Bar
Pick your poison
One is sweeter than the other,
But does that make the affect any different
You ask the bartender for another,
But this ones effect is different;
A reaction that is completely unexpected
You can't breathe, you cant' think..
But you can't stop..
The taste so SWEET
You wake up... When did you sleep?
Was it all a dream?
Or was it just a night out at the Candy Bar?
You remember it all so clear;
But was it real?
It must be,
The taste is still in your mouth......
This is not bad at all. I give it an 8. Can't wait to read more of your poems.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
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4/21/2024 3:45:48 PM # 1.0.0.1119
You ask the bartender for another, But this ones effect is different; A reaction that is completely unexpected You can't breathe, you cant' think.. But you can't stop.. The taste so SWEET what a sweet and lovely stanzas of your rich and well done poem.. rich idea, professionally written, romantic, meaningful and more then poem with hidden indicators, and open eyes fantsies type..liked it very much..10/10