The Building Poem by Mick Law

The Building

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They came from far afield to build it
It was a lifetimes tribute to their gods
It towered above their straw thatched village
And people died in piles to see it done

It stood a hundred lifetimes
through rotting grass and congealed blood
It's shadow filmed a thousand stories
Of love, of hope and slaughter

It drove its roots in deep and hard
through countless lives of diverse souls
And when they parted into soil
It looked down and coldly carried on

Its purpose lost and meaning gone
It crumbled slow but sure
and lonely shepherd stopped and stared
and dreamed of all that was

I wonder what these bricks once were
who was it strove to have it born
and what it's known and what it's seen
I walk back home for supper's due

Wednesday, March 26, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: history
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
an ancient ruin in a field evokes thoughts of what it used to be
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ernestine Northover 03 April 2008

A poem with great imagery and history. How often have we stood and wondered at ancient relics and ruins about the life led then. This is very well thought out and produced. Nostalgia woven through it. Love Ernestine XXX

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Mick Law

Mick Law

Thurnscoe South Yorkshire, UK
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