The Broken Rainbow Poem by nimal dunuhinga

The Broken Rainbow

Rating: 5.0


The shepherd boy's tattered red kite entangles in the rainbow
And he cries while sitting on the burning earth like a motherless child.
He knows the rainbow is short-lived
And he repents of his poor kite where it transmigrates in the endless sky leaving the kith & kin?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alison Cassidy 19 March 2008

I have to concur with Denis' comment. Your are a born poet, Nimal. Poetry runs through your veins like blood. Beautiful in sound and subject. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Joseph Daly 14 March 2008

As ever Nimal, purely beautiful. Just the language alone make this and your work in general, so necessary. With you it is the sound of the words that seem to be important and this wonderful poem, substansiates my view.

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Sandra Fowler 13 March 2008

To give one's self away in words is the greatest gift of all. A tear for the shepherd boy and his broken dreams. Lovely write, Nimal. Always your friend at poemhunter, Sandra

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kalubovila East, Sri Lanka
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