The Broken Organ Poem by Raja Ali

The Broken Organ

Rating: 4.5


The conception of my love is drastic
She broke my heart and started a static
She doesnt know what she has done
Shes a kid and thought, it was fun
I was changed in more ways than possible
She ignored me, its so horrible
Life is short, live it with your love
But she broke me and flew away like a dove
Even the universe is not that complex
Her eyes, her smile and that reflex
The organ of love is trying not to cry
But it did, because my love didnt just go by
Her smile, her touch was never so missed
Because when it was time, we never kissed
The organ is broken, but there is still time
For that smile, id do any crime

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Patricia Grantham 21 October 2014

Love is a very strong emotion. It can sometimes turn our lives upside down. Nonetheless we still overcome it. Passionately written and to the point. Nice.

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Anne Catherine Mccord 09 September 2011

your second best id say........<3

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Raja Ali 15 July 2019

Please start reviewing again, i have started writing again,

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Dane Fagerson 09 September 2011

the organ is good again...........excellent composition! ! !

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Alex Melinov 09 September 2011

I feel you man......truely amazing...!

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Ibnu Din Assingkiri 31 January 2011

the organ is broken, but there is still time For that smile I'd do any crime Such a beautiful end with gigantic impact.

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