The Broken Hearted Poem by Stephen Katona

The Broken Hearted

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Then in a clearing those broken hearted met,
So full they all seemed of regret.
They looked each other in the eye,
Life had made them want to die,
Tears showed they could understand,
As they took each other by the hand.
At first it seemed to take a while,
Then the first face began to smile.

Wednesday, March 25, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: depression
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A continuation of Lora Colon's 'Forest of the Damned'.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kelly Kurt 25 March 2015

Amazing what a smile can do. Great poem. Thanks for sharing. Peace

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Maria Gonzalez 01 August 2015

Beautiful expression of unexpected hope. Well penned.

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Amitava Sur 03 April 2015

Wow' Stephan it reminds me one our bengaly proverbs shesh theke shuru means a beginning from the end. Well said.

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Valsa George 29 March 2015

Smile is infectious! Now the smile will pass from face to face.....! The knowledge that there are people who understand us itself will alleviate our pain! A cute little write, Stephen!

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Lorraine Colon 26 March 2015

My poem did seem unfinished, and this is a perfect ending to it - a happy ending. Everyone loves a happy ending. Of course, now I'll expect you to provide a happy ending for all my poems, ha.

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Hazel Durham 26 March 2015

A thought provoking write beautifully written, a smile gives you hope to go that extra mile!

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