Musfiq us shaleheen

Veteran Poet - 1,888 Points (31st, December,1970 / Khulna, Bangladesh)

The Broken Gadget - Poem by Musfiq us shaleheen

Any song can sound sweet,
if you tune your tone right
Add a lyric
and a melody
and where there is poetry, there is beauty
But some songs are not only a love song
This idea of a twisted, passionate, black and blue love song
is not romantic

You were a broken gadget
and I thought I would know how to handle it.
Like if I could be the only to patch you back up again,
everything would fall into place.
But I lost the injunction
and there were bit lost that I couldn't find
and too many jagged edges.
I couldn't let myself be torn down anymore
in an attempt to keep you whole


@Musfiq us shaleheen
July,2014


Poet's Notes about The Poem

You were a broken gadget
and I thought I would know how to handle it.
Like if I could be the only to patch you back up again,
everything would fall into place.
But I lost the injunction
and there were bit lost that I couldn't find
and too many jagged edges.
I couldn't let myself be torn down anymore
in an attempt to keep you whole

Comments about The Broken Gadget by Musfiq us shaleheen

  • Gold Star - 16,758 Points Deepak Kumar Pattanayak (7/16/2014 10:16:00 AM)

    The crescent to fill to look it whole
    For the moon looks delightful when in full............very nice Musfiq.............. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, July 15, 2014



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