Musfiq us shaleheen

Rookie - 851 Points (31st, December,1970 / Khulna, Bangladesh)

The broken gadget


Any song can sound sweet,
if you tune your tone right
Add a lyric
and a melody
and where there is poetry, there is beauty
But some songs are not only a love song
This idea of a twisted, passionate, black and blue love song
is not romantic

You were a broken gadget
and I thought I would know how to handle it.
Like if I could be the only to patch you back up again,
everything would fall into place.
But I lost the injunction
and there were bit lost that I couldn't find
and too many jagged edges.
I couldn't let myself be torn down anymore
in an attempt to keep you whole


@Musfiq us shaleheen
July,2014

Submitted: Tuesday, July 15, 2014

Topic of this poem: sad love


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You were a broken gadget
and I thought I would know how to handle it.
Like if I could be the only to patch you back up again,
everything would fall into place.
But I lost the injunction
and there were bit lost that I couldn't find
and too many jagged edges.
I couldn't let myself be torn down anymore
in an attempt to keep you whole

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