The Bleeding World Poem by Y Sunita Devi

The Bleeding World

Rating: 5.0


I see the world bleeding, .
Sands of every region is soaked in blood,
Air of every land is filled with smoke,
Everywhere I see the world bleeding.

Differences of opinion,
Differences of ideal,
Differences of belief,
Differences of everything.

I see the world bleeding,
With a bleeding heart,
With no power to stop it,
With no way to stop the bloody game!



23/01/09

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chad Robinson 21 March 2009

You are so right....the world is bleeding and its poetry like this that helps tto heal its wounds.thank you for writing this.

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Sebastine Humaemo 02 February 2009

A poem which pictures the real happenin n ths world.........cheers for u winnie, for makin ur mind n soul mixed n this poem........can see the hiddn emotions n tears u hav behind these lines....much true.........people go mad of diff belief, diff race this tht....who gonna stop? ...n when? ..still a myth.......... ' world cries for sure......everywhre no one is pure.....mind stops thinkin while suckin te blood of othrs..........soul rejoice seeing a brothrn die.......one hav to keep in mind we wont tke anythin aft death, wll be just an unsen fly........' ..................10 +++++ sebastine

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Ana Zaldivar 27 January 2009

jmm... it expresses very well the situation in the world... i also wrote something about it.. but for my country ''to my honduras''... im tired and sick of this situation, the world doesn't get better and us people... we don't do anything about it.... nice poem, and ver realistic! :)

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