The Big Girl Poem by Luwi Habte

The Big Girl

Rating: 4.3


Here I am away from home
Living like a wild child
Surviving in a time which is so hard

Can I return the time back?
Living in the abdomen of mom
I miss what I was......

Things derive me crazy
I hate that I am a big lady
I wish to be a cute baby

Being big girl
Hurts a lot brings suffer
Need to be baby girl! ! !

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mubeen Sadhika 02 September 2009

Nice little cute poem. Simply showing the good feeling.

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C. P. Sharma 11 July 2009

Your poetry has child like innocence. CP

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things derive me crazy i hate that i am a big lady i wish to be a cute baby... to remainas child and to dreamas such is very enjoyable life... good write, , , , read mine child, school & hen laid an eggs......comment too

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Lindo Mvelase 18 April 2009

very nice expression, its cool to stay as a kid, though life has to go on & we have to move on to face our new fates, not a cool thing though. I like your poem.

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Jonathan Ghirmay 08 March 2009

well done girl keep it up, am sure that one day u gona be a great poter.

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