The Best Defete Of All Poem by Bonnie Collins

The Best Defete Of All

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Writting the defete, was easy as it
potrayed the image of what I perceived
as my fathers final hours

Why is it so difficult to compose a tribute
so delicate for you mom

Why is it difficult to open that part and
give it life so I can too, finally put this
into perspective

If I never do a defete in your honor
please understand from above for
reasons only you and I can share
are maybe the best defete of all..........


Dedicated to my mother in
her final journey............

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bob Gibson 12 September 2008

Words are very powerful sometimes they make us cry And the urology that's given, we later wonder why? I wrote it with such feeling, but I was in distress I've thought about it now Mom, I wish i could redress!

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Andrew Blakemore 31 July 2008

I truly feel for you Bonnie. This is a wonderful tribute from one special lady to another. Love, Andrew x

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James B. Earley 27 July 2008

We lose a loved one...in death, only in the physical sense. Spiritually....they remain very much alive....sanctuaried...safely within the memory. Be well! .........

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Bonnie Collins

Bonnie Collins

Middletown New York
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