The Batmobile. Poem by JOSE MURGUIA
The Batmobile.
you took me to school
and you brought me back,
now that ure gone i wonder were you're at,
you didnt have style,
you were a discrase,
but i didnt care because you took me to that place,
we been thru flat tires and blow out engines,
but to us you were a legend,
we usto get embarassed when people stared,
now we look at the empty spot and wish you were there,
you was a ugly car,
when we went places we made you park far,
now we look at the sky
and wonder were you are,
memories happines and smiles
are all thats left,
the batmobile i sware to god will never forget.
2/01/01 written by me and my friend nacho.
this poem is dedicated to everyone that has had a car before that was really ugly but it was all you had but it took you were you had to go this is my story dedicated to my dads batmobile know famously in the city of el monte ca, in the late 90's rest in peace.
Copyright ©2009 Jose Murguia
i like this poem. i never had a batmobile either but i do have a mustang gt. i would trade that anyday for a batmobile
lol! you are pretty sentimental, ain't ya? actually, if i didn't read your 'P.S.', i would really think that you're pertaining to someone whom you lost... well...this is so cute..(^_^)
This is a great piece of writing. At first I was confused that it was about a person, the writing is so clever. I'm surprised more people aren't sentimental about their first cars (75 Nova! I miss it)
lol reminds me of my cousins car its a crappy car so he parks it far away from all the other cars nd wen u ask him why he saids cause he doesnt want someone 2 scratch it and it has a thousand of scratchs lol but i love this poem
Are you sure this is about a car and not a lost loved one? If it is only a car I have a 'silver streak'
lol this is good ;) lol I've never heard a peom on a car but hey its nice :)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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i gave this a 10 to start you off, very creative.