The Barefoot Prophet On The Beach Poem by Birgitta Abimbola Heikka

The Barefoot Prophet On The Beach

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The yawning sky accompanies
the cries and the beating bell
of the barefoot prophet.

Wavering like the wind,
a strange specter in the horizon
adorned in a white robe flowing.

'Repent of your sins
for near is the end! '

His wails, the waves
bear though barred windows
rousing sinners from slumber deep.

They sneer at the seer
who daily tramps on their repose
with his ravings.

But the *Celestial steers not
the sluggish sand, trudging
his feet bare; his mission clear.

*A member of the Celestial Church in Nigeria. Members who are known for short as the 'Celes' believe that the beach is a holy place of worship.

Thursday, May 1, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: religious
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
*A member of the Celestial Church in Nigeria. Members who are known for short as the 'Celes' believe that the beach is a holy place of worship.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Daniel Brick 13 July 2015

Your poem does justice to both the prophet with his committed sincerity and the non-believers who are just irritated by his commitment. The description of the sky as yawning in the first image placed him in a convincing setting, just as the sleeping non-believers were in a characteristic setting - bed! I appreciate your not taking sides in this poem, because frankly I think they're both right, the two sides can each justify their attitude. the prophet has to nag and cajole non-believers, it's the meaning of his life. Meanwhile, the people he's trying to arouse are happy with LA DOLCE VITA which is just fine in a secularized world.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 April 2015

yes beach is holy place from where originates sea raising waves to wash our sins, such scen3 is never seen

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Kelly Kurt 20 March 2015

An interesting piece. Thank you for sharing

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