.......The Alliance....... Poem by Aastha Uppal

.......The Alliance.......

Rating: 3.0


Never will they come face-to-face
And never will they together praise
All they have in common is the craze
To win the life's neverending race.

Efforts to unite them will go in vain
One will be hurt but both in pain
And they do know there's no gain
Unless they join hands
you'll travel in an undestined train.

Neither can you run nor surrender
Don't give up its a blunder
Make them agree give it a best shot
To keep trying is your last resort.

Never can they unite yet both are your part
Yes you are right they are your HEAD and HEART
Your head will always play a trick
And heart will always prick

Wait for the day when an Alliance will form
And you'll be free from this violent storm
That day you'll rule the world
So go ahead and conquer it all! ! ! !


-aAstha

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shelly Shelly 20 December 2009

Never can they unite yet both are your part Yes you are right they are your HEAD and HEART Your heard will always play a trick And heart will always prick very innovative thought...u differentiated really splendid way..this s what the truth is.. really impressing... keep on writing...10 from me...

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What a poem...! A real imagination of the reality An honest message given... A complete 10 as the poem and the poetess deserve it...!

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 10 February 2010

You have written a wonderful poem, Aastha. I think it's too ideal that heart and mind join together to form an alliance. But some people do have balance in their lives. Great write. Keep up the good work...10/10. Naseer

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Marieta Maglas 10 February 2010

you'll travel in an undestined train. wonderful poem, well espressed ideas to convey the message.. 10+ Mari

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Sivashanmugam Shanmugam 11 February 2010

cheerful song! keep it up...

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Aranthabailu Ummar 05 October 2011

hopes still lingers, toleramce still endures may a day bring good for us

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Afzal Shauq 03 May 2010

wow sweet poem is this one too..10/10

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Sarvesh Kulkarni 08 March 2010

the eternal battle of head and heart. nice poem. 'One will be hurt but both in pain' liked it. thank you.

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Head vs heart When will it end When did it start Well done my friend. I really like it!

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Allemagne Roßmann 22 February 2010

All they have in common is the craze To win the life's neverending race. Not they...................we all have this craze.........well written

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