The Absolute Perfect Murder Poem by Trunami ...

The Absolute Perfect Murder

Rating: 4.9


if you seek execution
of the absolute perfect murder - rural or city
it shall not be accomplished by flawless plans,
in the hunt of stealth activity
not by moving in secret,
under cover of shadows - night above
not by wearing a shadowy cloak,
dark mask and tough leather gloves
not with a calm cold heart,
completely clothed in all black - to mesh
not with accentuated red eyes, fiery,
boiling organs of your flesh
not by pitter pattering in the wet streets
like rain falling - bursting drops
with a watered mouth of solvent sugar,
comtemplating, sucking, dissolving a lollipop
not by encroaching with sheltered hatred
of your target fixed - basking
not by exposing steel glistened,
eager intent fueling fingers grasping
no; facilitation of murder in perfection
of absolute perception - of self
circles when one premeditates to kill
the murderous spirit itself
a conscienceness of inner war,
conquer the treacherous violence of heart - a prefect
its immobilization, its spiritualization,
its bloodlessness, its life, its perfect

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
***** ********* 21 January 2006

I must admit Trunami, I have been ignoring your storm for a while now! Why, I have no idea. Fantastic poem, full of fire of re-ignited life. An excellent 10 from storm struck! Tai

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Peter Lebuhn 21 January 2006

You scare me! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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