That's My World Poem by Ayesha Tulkubra

That's My World

Rating: 5.0


An ocean of blood.
That's my World.
An effort to swim,
The vision growing dim
Sharks circling,
Hope is to which i cling.
I see sharp, pointed teeth.
Waves flowing above my head.
Its getting hard to breath.
Tried calling a name.
Nobody there, who should i blame?
One last time,
My head moved through a rhyme.
That running through veins.
Now rushing through throat.
In a few moments.
Cold, worthless mass'll float.
An elegy of sins.
A melody of virtues.
Death's lullaby'll drag.
To an ending snooze.

Sunday, August 3, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: pain
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
There was a time when I used to think that people around me are my enemies and they constantly try to bring me down. It's the depiction of such feelings.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Abhishek Tiwari 03 August 2014

waooo.. Waooo. Waoooo... Thats ummm... Am falling short of words... Its Extremly beautiful poem... Once i slipped into ur poem.. I found myself immediately swept across it and into the end... It was like a marry-go-round flow... And waoo what an imaginative intervention into the nerves that thrills from within... Double thumbs up! ! !

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