Ramdas Bhandarkar

Rookie - 34 Points (Madikeri)

That's All Poem by Ramdas Bhandarkar


Divine is Omnipresent
we believe and live at present
'where then I am' I ask
searching under the mask
behind souls and things..
Searching behind idols and dolls,
Sometimes for Superman
Like Batman Mind soar high
into mountain caves, top of hills
Flapping its wings
sometimes crawls on knees
like spiderman forgetting
to behave like human



Tired soul stroll on sea shores
thinking of fishes in ocean
Do fishes feel thirsty?
mind asks now weak and humble
Voice within anwers...
'Unlike fishes why you feel thirsty
Living in ocean of eternity
just live in present
open up your heart and mind's eye
and close eyes to feel yourself
within lies the heaven
listen to soul's call
just no more sighs
between every night and dawn,
you are with me and I am with you
Nothing mysterious I am your breath
that's all. '

Submitted: Wednesday, February 5, 2014
Edited: Friday, February 7, 2014
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  • Rookie - 16 Points Cleveland Gibson (2/5/2014 5:09:00 AM)

    I think your poem is interest with good content. I do think you might consider expanding the poem a little with slightly longer sentences to bring out the meaning more. But please remember that is only my opinion. Well done and keep writing.
    Best wishes
    Cleveland W. Gibson (Report) Reply

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