That Garden I Dream About Poem by Viola Grey

That Garden I Dream About

Rating: 5.0


Sweet scent
of rotten leaves
which linger, lonely,
upon dark paths.

Captured by moonlight
blackened roses
tempt the night
with their clotted perfume.

Grass glows emerald
in the face of the moon,
dew like onyx
rests upon blades
tempting insects
to drown in their droplets.

Withered daisies
beg for sunlight
but their golden cries
echo back into gloom
of a darkened garden
through which
I wander
wondering when
I'll be with you.

15/6/08

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lawerence Mize 12 May 2014

Very nice poem. Thanks for sharing.

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Ridge Cahill 02 November 2008

You've such an original and wonderful way about you - this poem is no exception.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 21 September 2008

A beautiful poem with beautiful metaphors. As if it were my dream.10 for it.

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Dawn Slanker 08 July 2008

Creative concept. I've never read a dark poem about a garden before, but I like it and the originality of it. Well done.

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