Thank You And Goodbye, My Beloved Poem by Captain Herbert Poetry

Thank You And Goodbye, My Beloved

Rating: 4.0


A letter on a box of soul
Curbed words in my dearly loved
Cannot express my true feeling
Prison emotions of saying I love you

A treasure glancing with you for a moment
Your smile gives me a doorway of forever
I want to hug in you in my dreams
I want to share and care you as my precious dearest

My silence will hold on my heart
My secret will not be known that you are my one and only
Words on my mind is only your most cherish name
A simple glimpse with you is a bright star dream

Thank you for all the wonderful and admirable moments
Those things are unforgettable heaven-sent times
Goodbye and need to break the chain of overflowing passion
Tears in my eyes with deepest hurt saying Goodbye, my Beloved.

Monday, September 1, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love hurts
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Lacovara 29 May 2015

Love does not end with the sad goodbye. For so many, the love remains, even after the beloved leaves. Thank you for the poignant reminder. It comes at a most opportune time. Lovely writing. PEACE

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Sossi Khachadourian 27 October 2014

Sad love unfortunate ending of real love, great write keep it up good luck!

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Matthias Pantaleon 09 October 2014

h! Sure pure and unspoilt love as this. I feel the emotion of the poet pouring out on every line. Well penned

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Matthias Pantaleon 09 October 2014

Oh! Sure pure and unspoilt love as this. I feel the emotion of the poet pouring out on every line. Well penned

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Ging Taping 04 September 2014

Sad ending..but i like it! wished you have courage to tell her I love you

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