Neela Nath


Thank You


Thank you for giving me
so love!
am i worthy of this
emotion?
I ask me and feel
ashamed of my incapability
O my master!
You have vision to see
present, past and future!
You know,
I'm nothing but a puppet
in a string swaying by
your hand!
In my solitariness
when I think of giving
back something to you,
I don't find anything
which I have but
having any value
to you!
I weep, I cry
and sit to breathe
my prayer.
My Lord don't leave,
be my pathfinder forever!

Submitted: Monday, September 09, 2013
Edited: Tuesday, September 10, 2013

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  • Gold Star - 37,706 Points Aftab Alam Khursheed (9/9/2013 9:10:00 PM)

    Prostrating a supplication glory to be the Lord thanks a lot (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,147 Points Thomas A Robinson (9/9/2013 6:21:00 PM)

    You have something of great value to the Lord... YOU!
    And you are not a pupet on a string, not a toy on a string
    You are the most precious of all things.
    Only a creator can hold all his creations most precious. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,032 Points Tiku . (9/9/2013 12:27:00 PM)

    Lord wont ever leave anyone and to a sweet soul like you never.We have to feel his presence.Very nice.You are awesome as always. (Report) Reply

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