Thank You Poem by Elena Sandu

Thank You

Rating: 5.0


I breathe my love for you
Because of you
My heart illuminates
In blue bright color shades
Because of you
I feel I've reached my fate..
Because of you
I'm blessed
With more then nothing:
Pain Sweet Pain..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Efe Benjamin 29 October 2010

short but very strong poem. I can feel d theme of love, trust faith. even tho we humans can cause pain smtimes, love stil covers all our weaknesses.

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Mien Bless 26 February 2012

well said... nice read...

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Rekha Mandagere 15 July 2011

One is ready to undergo pain for the sake of sweet love. It is a greater human value ever existing in the society. Thanks for sharing such a wonderful theme.

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ian McArthur 06 February 2011

Strong poem. I find the idea of a 'sweet pain' a touch unsettling though. Not the pain itself, but the gain by it that is sweet, as Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon said in more concise words. Chance set me to this poem after you commented on my poem 'gentle stream' - by coincidence both poems are very similar.

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How can pain ever be sweet except that gain usually comes after pain. I thank the pain because it brought me much gain. Well done my friend.

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Pranab K Chakraborty 04 November 2010

'Even pain that is a God to the senses'. Poet Marwin once written this line. And you the fulfilled lover think yourself blessed with pain, so you are also great. Well written love. Your beloved live long with you.....long to its extreme. Thank you for sharing such a poem.....10 Regards, pranab

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