Terrace Of Violence Poem by Ahmad Shiddiqi

Terrace Of Violence

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(dedicated to Mr.Gustavo Dudamel, a great conductor)

people
animals
buildings
wrenched

a scene of death
violence and brutality
suffering and helplessness
the lifelessness war affords

a light bulb blazes
the image of a flame
a horse falling in agony
the shape of a human skull

a frightened female
a dove stands on a shelf
fire from above and below
soldier grasps a shattered sword

a continuous struggle
the bull and the horse
military caste which has sunk
an ocean of death and misery

to express protest
the pain and the chaos
the destructive power of civil war
black, and white somber moods

the most ancient town of the Basques
the center of their cultural tradition
the refuges of civilian population
the destruction symbol of war

a small village
underwent an attack
was completely destroyed
and killed many innocent lives

the light sun
the massacre
the broken sword
the defeat of the people

an anti-war symbol
a perpetual reminder
an embodiment of peace
the suffering upon innocent civilians

the essential unity
the integrity of soil
the independence
the right of destiny

no more wars
no more tears
no more tricks
no more victims

can we deny the pursuing of desires?
can we stop the killing game?
can't we have cheerful days?
can't we quit playing God?

(inspired by Pablo Picasso's Guernica)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Thad Wilk 20 December 2008

Powerful poem eloquently written Ahmad! United together i know you will win over this evil an terror an see no more violence an warring an peace and prosperity will prevail.. Best regards! *10plus*! Friend Thad

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Aldo Kraas 20 December 2008

This poem is very good And it is well spoken

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Katherine Ng Li Hoon 20 December 2008

Good write! Keep it up!

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Ana Dasilva 20 December 2008

Well written..thanks for sharing

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Kite Remedy 21 December 2008

War is a painful thing to face, resulting many predicaments.. War itself is a predicament.. Well penned..

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Deepti Agarwal 11 January 2009

good thought provoking words.... liked it..

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Gargi Saha 07 January 2009

A WONDERFUL POEM................

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Dr Rajesh Kumar Vaid 30 December 2008

I shouls see Guernica again and read this back!

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Reshma Ramesh 23 December 2008

no more tricks.....................well penned sir.......

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Ben Gieske 23 December 2008

I admire Picasso’s Guernica and you have captured and portrayed much of what he tired to say with pictures. I could tell that you were describing his work (bull and horse) even before I read the bottom note. We need these reminders of war and its atrocities. Unfortunately in answer to your questions, we can only say, “We can and will try.” We need to keep asking these questions. Very will composed.. The word “wrenched” in the first stanza is very effective.

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Ahmad Shiddiqi

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Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
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