Ten Is The Goal Poem by Jim Norausky

Ten Is The Goal

Rating: 4.4


Ten is perfection on many measures.

Bo Dereck prancing in the tropical sand.

Nadia Comaneci waving on the Olympic stand.

Poemhunter poets posting their treasures.

Not forgotten was Virginia Apgar in the fifties

who devised a scoring system

to measure health of newborn babies.

Doctors now judge babies on five factors,

maximum two points each for pulse,

grimace, appearance, respiration, and activity.

My daughter was a nine, and son an eight.

He could have been a ten

if he had peed straight.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Williams 31 January 2016

hahahahahaha. I liked the conversational tone of this piece and the information on these 1-10 scales we live under. Love the sense of humor!

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Paolo Giuseppe Mazzarello 12 January 2009

Humankind organizes, catalogues, assigns numbers to its members. I agree with this author that one 'could have been a ten/ if he had peed straight'. Luckily Pelè, (do you remmember soccer? he played with the Cosmos) , wore the shirt number ten.

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Fiona Davidson 11 January 2009

Lovely poem Jim...made me smile...I do enjoy reading your poems...thank you...Fi

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Kevin Wells 10 January 2009

Brilliant! light hearted and fun. Brought a smile to an otherwise cold and grey morning.

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