Tell Me Your Secret Poem by Chelsey Mcewan

Tell Me Your Secret



Tell me your secret
I promise not to tell
I'll gard it safely at the bottom of the well


Tell me your secret tell me tellme please
I won't breve a word not evan to the bees



Tell me your secret
It will be a paddle in my mouth
Not Evan the sea can make me spip it out

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jerry Buckley 17 January 2012

Nice to see someone so young as yourself writing poetry. I like this one, but if I can be so bold, please check your spelling. (gard /guard....breve / breath...Evam / even...spip / spit) I know you want to make a good first impression with your art, so take a little extra time to proof read before posting, and make sure it is correct... Keep on writing... you have a talent for this

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