Tell Me Where Your Smiles Hide Poem by Unwritten Soul

Tell Me Where Your Smiles Hide

Rating: 4.5


No matter where it gone
Tell me where your smile hides
We shall climbing high to the clouds
Searching across the driest desert
Diving into the deep oceans
But maybe it just inside
In your own heart

Allow me to find
And return to your face
The place where it belong
To add beauty with the world
No matter how far it went hiding
Tell me where, where it going
We could save your smile

Mostly if it hiding inside
Give me the map of your heart
I'll wander around to bring it home
Will you share me where your smile hides?
Unveil me a clue for a road i should go
For it to be on your skin again

How deep inside, it going drown
Could be it lost and dried inside
If you give me a map of your heart
I'll dive and bring it home
and back it to life on your face
For the world see how precious it is
After how long your smiles hide

Let me read the map of your heart
I will find where your smiles hide
And happiness will alive
Again

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Where your smiles gone
How far it going hide?
Not far just deep
When all miseries, wandering thought and worries gone,
you will find smile with happiness to come around
if you cant find it just tell me
tell me about your heart's map
so i will read and find it for you
Smile cost you no penny but to get it not easy
As much as precious mean, it equal to unsought value _SOul

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Geetha Jayakumar 18 August 2013

Yes, dear my smiles are gone nor I can find my heart's map as my smiles took away my hearts map too. but your lovely poem brought back the smiles on my face.... Beautiful poem..Loved reading it.

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Lucifera Santez 18 August 2013

Allow me to find And return to your face The place where it belong To add beauty with the world. amazing lines. loved the soulful concept. :)

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Farah Ilyas 18 August 2013

Here it is: -p hahaha...hmmm how sweet to read ur poem, its fabulous to read, read and read again..a melodious poem Soul...loved it

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Valsa George 18 August 2013

If smile disappears from the face of someone, especially someone we know close, it is our duty to find out its reason and help him/her get back that smile! As a humane person, you cannot ignore the glum face of someone you love. You are prepared to map out where smile hides and dig it out, like a good geologist! ! A really praise worthy attitude! !

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Kumarmani Mahakul 16 March 2018

Smile is the key of heart that can easily open the hearts of others. It can remove the miseries, wandering thought and worries and brings happiness. Smiles cost us no penny but to get it isn't easy. Dear poetess Soul, you have hauntingly and startlingly inscribed here about smiles. Beautiful didactic poem shared. Thanks.10

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Hazel Durham 21 August 2016

Great imagination and the plea for the smile you love on your beloved to come back and for you to dive into your beloved's heart to bring it back to the face you love, to swim in the joy melting in his eyes to bring back happy to your beloved's face! Superb write!

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Unwritten Soul 22 August 2016

I love to see people smiling and be happy... it make surrounding me alive, not just living....and of course i want to see all here, my readers and you to smile, be happy too :) Thanks Hazel for reading me...Keep smiling

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Susan Lacovara 09 September 2013

Enjoyed your straight from th heart lyrics...Will continue to read your poetry. Please feel free to comment on mine, as well. PEACE

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Susan Lacovara 09 September 2013

Shouldn't everyone spend a little more time searching for smiles...enjoyed your straight from the heart lyrics. Will continue to read your poetry. Feel free to comment on mine as well. PEACE

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Heather Wilkins 02 September 2013

let me read the map of your heart I will find where your smiles hide nice and sweet

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