Unwritten Soul


Tell Me Where Your Smiles Hide


No matter where it gone
Tell me where your smile hides
We shall climbing high to the clouds
Searching across the driest desert
Diving into the deep oceans
But maybe it just inside
In your own heart

Allow me to find
And return to your face
The place where it belong
To add beauty with the world
No matter how far it went hiding
Tell me where, where it going
We could save your smile

Mostly if it hiding inside
Give me the map of your heart
I'll wander around to bring it home
Will you share me where your smile hides?
Unveil me a clue for a road i should go
For it to be on your skin again

How deep inside, it going drown
Could be it lost and dried inside
If you give me a map of your heart
I'll dive and bring it home
and back it to life on your face
For the world see how precious it is
After how long your smiles hide

Let me read the map of your heart
I will find where your smiles hide
And happiness will alive
Again

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Where your smiles gone
How far it going hide?
Not far just deep
When all miseries, wandering thought and worries gone,
you will find smile with happiness to come around
if you cant find it just tell me
tell me about your heart's map
so i will read and find it for you
Smile cost you no penny but to get it not easy
As much as precious mean, it equal to unsought value _SOul

Submitted: Saturday, August 17, 2013
Edited: Tuesday, August 20, 2013

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  • Rookie - 842 Points Susan Lacovara (9/9/2013 12:14:00 PM)

    Enjoyed your straight from th heart lyrics...Will continue to read your poetry. Please feel free to comment on mine, as well. PEACE (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 842 Points Susan Lacovara (9/9/2013 12:11:00 PM)

    Shouldn't everyone spend a little more time searching for smiles...enjoyed your straight from the heart lyrics. Will continue to read your poetry. Feel free to comment on mine as well. PEACE (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 6,576 Points Ramesh Rai (8/26/2013 10:02:00 AM)

    smiles are hidden in soul which is much more deeper than that of sky. the depth of this poem can not b measured why not of sky is feasible. beautiful smiling write. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 11 Points Alookh (matin) (8/21/2013 4:22:00 AM)

    Let me read the map of your heart
    I will find where your smiles hide... very creative and i liked the idea.. :) (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 3,860 Points Neela Nath (8/20/2013 10:17:00 AM)

    Smile is the reflection of mind.Your search is appropriate.Really it is getting lost in the mist of disbelief, distrust and lack of simplicity. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 423 Points Kee Thampi (8/19/2013 2:33:00 AM)

    touched the bottom love
    His pain
    for his love at her soul
    If you give me a map of your heart
    I'll dive and bring it home

    love
    kee (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 6,587 Points Valsa George (8/18/2013 11:29:00 PM)

    If smile disappears from the face of someone, especially someone we know close, it is our duty to find out its reason and help him/her get back that smile! As a humane person, you cannot ignore the glum face of someone you love. You are prepared to map out where smile hides and dig it out, like a good geologist! ! A really praise worthy attitude! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 12 Points Farah Ilyas (8/18/2013 11:51:00 AM)

    Here it is: -p hahaha...hmmm how sweet to read ur poem, its fabulous to read, read and read again..a melodious poem Soul...loved it (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 20 Points Lucifera Santez (8/18/2013 10:02:00 AM)

    Allow me to find
    And return to your face
    The place where it belong
    To add beauty with the world.
    amazing lines.
    loved the soulful concept.
    :) (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 2,990 Points Geetha Jayakumar (8/18/2013 9:25:00 AM)

    Yes, dear my smiles are gone
    nor I can find my heart's map
    as my smiles took away my hearts map too.
    but your lovely poem brought back the smiles on my face....

    Beautiful poem..Loved reading it. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 234 Points Shahzia Batool (8/18/2013 7:11:00 AM)

    Confident topographical expertise,

    Let me read the map of your heart
    I will find where your smiles hide
    And happiness will alive
    Again (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 5 Points Adheez Van Der Beanthz (8/18/2013 5:27:00 AM)

    wonderful Soul..
    your words and imagery so alive
    sweet and tender of smile, that's why we have to find and save it, no matter its cost

    smile make the world brights
    like lantern in the darkness side
    a hope of your sight
    to fly to the beauty of paradise (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 5 Points Nontobeko Dlamini (8/18/2013 4:15:00 AM)

    a smile can brighten the darkest nights of ones life...it is hope. Love this poem for i believe in the power of a smile. Thank you Soul. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 5 Points Nader Baheri (8/18/2013 3:04:00 AM)

    oh i love this poem.so sweet.with just a simple smile life would be so sweet.sometimes we hide it.thank you bringing my smile up.
    ~nb (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 5 Points Arnav Gogoi (8/18/2013 12:18:00 AM)

    Mostly if it hiding inside
    Give me the map of your heart
    I'll wander around to bring it home
    Will you share me where your smile hides?

    Good expression....love the use of words..good imageries as well...thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

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