DEEPAK KUMAR PATTANAYAK


Tell Me Sun - Poem by DEEPAK KUMAR PATTANAYAK

Tell me Sun
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Tell me Sun
Who is the dearest?
The spring or the autumn
One charms you with a rose
Another with a thorn
And equal upon them you call
Without any discrimination
O Sun! What a profound mind
You carry when you touch all
And in reverence deep
Down goes my head thou Sol
A life that never dies
Do tell me
Who is the dearest?
The spring or the autumn
For the circumference you carry
Spurs my soul to muse upon
And that goes beyond my perception.........


Comments about Tell Me Sun by DEEPAK KUMAR PATTANAYAK

  • Veteran Poet - 1,092 Points Musfiq Us Shaleheen (7/12/2014 4:08:00 AM)

    spring is full with love and hope
    autumn is a memory of love and hope

    very nice poem... (Report) Reply

    Gold Star - 16,063 Points Deepak Kumar Pattanayak (7/12/2014 10:23:00 AM)

    Many many thanks.......Musfiq........I am humbled......

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  • Rookie - 11 Points Tanmay Kumar Sankhua (7/10/2014 11:36:00 AM)

    many many thanks............ (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,346 Points Mr. Nobody (7/6/2014 10:45:00 AM)

    Sun, Sun come and stay
    Be it December, August or May...

    I loved you poem
    Thanks (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 20,480 Points Valsa George (7/2/2014 12:09:00 PM)

    Sun sheds light on the brute and the beast... on the king and the pauper.. He never discriminates... He is steady and never fails to light each day.... A great tribute to the sun! (Report) Reply

    Gold Star - 16,063 Points Deepak Kumar Pattanayak (7/2/2014 12:57:00 PM)

    Many many thanks........Valsa........I am humbled................

  • Gold Star - 6,634 Points Salini Nair (7/2/2014 12:29:00 AM)

    like each line.............like it (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,116 Points Geetha Jayakumar (6/30/2014 12:25:00 PM)

    Beautiful question,
    put to the sun,
    penned down in a poem.
    The sun said
    the answer lies within you
    for me both rose and thorns are same
    as I shine same on you.
    I make no discrimination
    its you who make this discrimination
    you have put a barrier between rose and thorn
    search for the answer
    the answer lies within in you....
    I hope so you are satisfied with the suns answer.
    Don't take my this comment seriously. I was just kidding. The real fact is answer lies within us. but we search outside...Beautiful poem once again from your pen. Loved reading it. (Report) Reply

    Gold Star - 16,063 Points Deepak Kumar Pattanayak (6/30/2014 12:37:00 PM)

    Many many thanks........Geetha.............I am humbled...................

  • Gold Star - 7,625 Points Neela Nath (6/29/2014 7:47:00 PM)

    A beautiful poem.......... (Report) Reply

    Gold Star - 16,063 Points Deepak Kumar Pattanayak (6/30/2014 12:38:00 PM)

    Many many thanks........Neelaji.............I am humbled...................

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, June 29, 2014

Poem Edited: Tuesday, July 1, 2014


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