Teenage Love Poem by louis rams

Teenage Love

Rating: 5.0


two teenagers so in love.
their hearts beating in
unison, one with the other.
and would not listen to their father or mother.

they felt that their love would conquer all.
and tear down any wall.

it did not matter what anyone
would say, and their minds they could not sway.

they had repeatedly heard that ' love could be blind'
but their love was one of a kind.
now in school they taught the golden rule
but to her ' she was no fool'.

she knew what could lie ahead
and that she could not sit back
or lie in bed.

so determined for their love to succeed
that they pushed themselves to get a degree
they both studied day and night
and would not give up this relentless fight.

three years later they had acheived their goal
and from then life started to unfold.

he became a doctor, and she a teacher
and now, no one could reach her.

a year later a child came
and they knew that life would never be the same.

but she proved that teenage love can survive
if you just give it a try.

and if you was to ask them, if they
would do it again.
their reply would be ' you betcha friend'.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

ah.. beautiful tale. i love how you ended it.

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Christine Kerr 25 April 2009

A nice heart warming poem, It's nice when a few couples can turn around the thought of 'What were you thinking' and make everyone stand up and take notice. It's sad that the majority always sees the negative in life first. A nice Proved you wrong theory rises again 10++

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Sandra Fowler 25 April 2009

A wonderful story. I hope it is true. Warm regards, Sandra

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