Soumita Sarkar Ray

Silver Star - 3,229 Points (Kolkata)

Teen Tweet - Poem by Soumita Sarkar Ray

Heart sings
desires get wings
the world around
soaked in feelings
...first blush
....first rush
......first twist
........first wish
a myriad of mystery
dispelled a myth
bloomed a beauty
in a capsule of youth
….no fear
……..no care
……………no share
………………..ample dare
ocean of dreams lie in eyes
a novice, not yet grown wise
…want to roam
………want to move
……………want a lot of fun
………………….want to run
Why judge me?
I am not a child, I have clear ideas
You designate them wild.
...My trials are weird
.....My ways are not sane
.......My fix is only mine
..........I relax with my kind.
Once you pass these days
You forget the hangover
You forget plight of this phase.
...Don’t instruct me.
.....Don't mould me.
.......Don’t punish me.
........Don't humiliate me.
..........Just guide me.
Become my friend
See the world as I see through
my i-pad and technology.


Comments about Teen Tweet by Soumita Sarkar Ray

  • Rookie - 0 Points Divya Gupta (7/7/2013 6:46:00 AM)

    Wht a poem on todays youth..well written.. Bt all teens r nt d same..: -) (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 5,807 Points Sekharan Pookkat (6/29/2013 6:48:00 PM)

    I cannot agree with you Sarkar-All times the so called youth were there ad their tastes were different-they were the forerunners against time and geographical limits. their rebellion against the establishment and the revolt against the existing rules and regulations made cultural revolution in the whole world. I believe in youth let them find their own correct way (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,265 Points Pradip Chattopadhyay (6/22/2013 11:45:00 AM)

    Looking unto them, though you may find them wild / remember once you too were a child

    you got it right soumita, difficult to bridge the generation gap (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,824 Points Wahab Abdul (6/13/2013 2:37:00 AM)

    wow! very nice one, and i am glad to see it here by my own eyes my own style in your poem....congratulation! ..10 (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,229 Points Soumita Sarkar (6/13/2013 12:41:00 AM)

    toady's youth has a distinct way........modern-new -sound and agile.parenting is tough task.... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, June 13, 2013

Poem Edited: Thursday, June 13, 2013


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