Tears Like Rain Poem by Hana Ali

Tears Like Rain

Rating: 4.5


I cry because you hurt me
I cry because you made me
sad, I cry because things
could have worked out.

I cry because you put me
down all these years, I cry
because you said one of the
worst things you could say
to a person.

I cry because my eyes are
tired, I cry because my heart
is slowing down, I cry because
they tell me that everything
is over, nothing left.

I cry because it was not
my fault but they say
cry me a river, and my eyes
are just dumb enough to keep
going.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Maria Mitea 01 June 2022

so well written this cry, Hana!

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still i rise....the ppl didn't lie so neither will i....you are a shooting star.... trust meh, I'm a cafe lover who prayer walks at night, also a sky watching bird whistler....1 question do you write from lifes experiences or from analytics, this piece imparticular.... don't cry 1st give me a try.... i love ambition back doe lil joe, intact is there a window open for me...your b u t ful

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Kelly Seale 07 August 2012

I like this one Hana, esp. the last stanza: I cry because it was not my fault but they say cry me a river, and my eyes are just dumb enough to keep going. -Very Good Write Hana! -Kelly.

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Ramesh Rai 29 May 2012

I appreciate your poem. grand write. keep it up. there are a lot of things to do.

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Romeo Della Valle 25 May 2012

Outburst of the heart clearly filtered through this well crafted and touching write which shows your deep emotions and also your great potential in the Poetry World! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City...

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