Treasure Island

Hana Ali


Tears Like Rain


I cry because you hurt me
I cry because you made me
sad, I cry because things
could have worked out.

I cry because you put me
down all these years, I cry
because you said one of the
worst things you could say
to a person.

I cry because my eyes are
tired, I cry because my heart
is slowing down, I cry because
they tell me that everything
is over, nothing left.

I cry because it was not
my fault but they say
cry me a river, and my eyes
are just dumb enough to keep
going.

Submitted: Friday, May 25, 2012
Edited: Saturday, May 26, 2012

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  • Coolwater Menstruums Shannon Daron Strauss (4/24/2013 12:18:00 PM)

    still i rise....the ppl didn't lie so neither will i....you are a shooting star.... trust meh, I'm a cafe lover who prayer walks at night, also a sky watching bird whistler....1 question do you write from lifes experiences or from analytics, this piece imparticular.... don't cry 1st give me a try.... i love ambition back doe lil joe, intact is there a window open for me...your b u t ful (Report) Reply

  • Kelly Seale (8/7/2012 5:00:00 PM)

    I like this one Hana, esp. the last stanza:

    I cry because it was not
    my fault but they say
    cry me a river, and my eyes
    are just dumb enough to keep
    going.

    -Very Good Write Hana!
    -Kelly. (Report) Reply

  • Ramesh Rai (5/29/2012 6:42:00 AM)

    I appreciate your poem. grand write. keep it up. there are a lot of things to do. (Report) Reply

  • Romeo Della Valle (5/25/2012 6:47:00 PM)

    Outburst of the heart clearly filtered through this well crafted and touching write which shows your deep emotions and also your great potential in the Poetry World! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City... (Report) Reply

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