Tears From Your Eyes Poem by john tiong chunghoo

Tears From Your Eyes

Rating: 4.8


dew drenched lotus
cleanses my heart
rain drops on the rose
refresh my heart
but, but, the tears from your eyes
tears at my heart
a beautiful bloom
torn torn to pieces

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lotus awash in dew
cleanses my heart
rose spotted by rain
refreshes my heart
but, but, the tears from your eyes
tears my heart
a beautiful bloom
torn torn to pieces

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
***** ********* 08 February 2006

No buts about it John! Excellent expression in this gorgeous little poem of yours. Thanks for sharing it. 10 from Tai

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Sandra Fowler 08 February 2006

Praise for your eloquent poem. I believe that God counts every tear that falls. Thank you for sharing. Kindest regards, Sandra Fowler

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allan james saywell 08 February 2006

A VERY SENSITIVE READ JOHN BETTER THEN ANY WAR STORY A REAL POEM AT LAST VERY WELL DONE RODNEY

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john tiong chunghoo

john tiong chunghoo

Sibu, Sarawak, Borneo East Malaysia
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