Tears Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Tears

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Boiled emotions
in fumes of heart
with Choked thoughts
on Burden pressure
with Relations strained
on Feelings drained
with Poisoned brain
on Trust broken
with Faith shaken
Mixture of the above
a tear comes out.

Thursday, October 8, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: tears
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajnish Manga 09 July 2020

Negativity all around leads to a hopeless situation to a hapless man. Tears bring relief to an anguished heart. Thanks so much.

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Darren Jkoeryo 12 December 2015

Very true, you said it nicely

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Edward Kofi Louis 09 October 2015

Tears! The tears of life; but, we need to be strong. Able to move on once again; because, tears are part of the scars of life. Nice work.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 08 October 2015

I saw wise use of so many adjective nicely. Well presentation. I like this poem. Thank you dear Asim for posting such an intensive poem. ....10

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