Indranil Bhaduri

Rookie - 97 Points (Kolkata, India)

Tears


The dazzling sunlight kindled my cheeks
As I traversed through the meandering streets
With a delighted self
Coveting to meet her again
With those romantic feelings
To heartily express.
I dreamt of her sweet face
With her waving silky hair
Enshrouding my vivid colourful soul.
With the hues of love all around,
The magical flowers bloomed
The quivering lips uttered
Soft whispers of belonging,
The deep eyes reached my inner self
As I stepped in front
Of the silent grave.
A tiny droplet of water touched my arm
And depicted my deep passion
With the crumbled petals of rose
Lying in my palm
That was never given ever,
Till she walked away,
To cross the doors of paradise
Leaving a solitary soul with moist eyes,
Longing forever to view
Her picturesque smile,
And dropping a lover's tears
To reach heaven.

Copyright © 2012 Indranil Bhaduri

Submitted: Tuesday, September 25, 2012
Edited: Tuesday, September 25, 2012

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  • Veteran Poet - 2,750 Points Hazel Durham (10/27/2012 7:47:00 AM)

    So beautiful and heart-rending poem with such deep emotions for the loss of your loved one. Brilliant write! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie A B (10/6/2012 4:31:00 AM)

    a v gud poem n well written.................crumbled petal of rose lying in my palm...v touchy (Report) Reply

  • Rookie So Close (10/4/2012 9:39:00 AM)

    you expressed the feeling of missing someone very fantastic ly and great work..

    »so close« (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 193 Points Naida Nepascua Supnet (10/4/2012 8:06:00 AM)

    you have nice reviews of this poem
    maybe because you wrote it with all your heart and the words burst with your emotions
    congratulations (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Brian Markey (9/28/2012 4:00:00 AM)

    Hi Indranil,

    a very loving poem about the frailties of life itself, we will all live and ultimately die but it's what's in between that sustains us throughout our lives along with the many memories we have to cherish.
    Life and death are what make us who we are as they are the ultimate experiences we come across daily, they show up our strengths as well as our weaknesses.
    If you have faith in your God you need never fear lifes trials and tribulations.
    Good Luck and God Bless.

    Bri Mar (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 330 Points Donald Kuutsi (9/26/2012 4:21:00 AM)

    tears stream down your face when you lose something you can replace....this is so touching keep it up pal.THIS IS MASTERPIECE WELL DONE....l also enjoyed Nostalgia keep it up (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 330 Points Donald Kuutsi (9/26/2012 4:09:00 AM)

    tears stream down your face when you lose something you cant replace......this is so touching..
    i m touched by this YOU ARE A BKESSING FROM GOD.......this is MASTERPIECE PAL KEEP THE FIRE BURNING.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Sanjay Mehta (9/25/2012 2:45:00 AM)

    Enshrouding my vivid colourful soul.
    With the hues of love all around,
    Longing for the beloved, desire that zeal that yearning remarkable. You have immortalized the love as expressed in these lines where the soul is enshrouded with hues of love all around. Nice obituary. (Report) Reply

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