Members Who Read Most Number Of Poems

Live Scores

Click here to see the rest of the list

(Kolkata, India)

What do you think this poem is about?

For Example: love, art, fashion, friendship and etc.

Tears

The dazzling sunlight kindled my cheeks
As I traversed through the meandering streets
With a delighted self
Coveting to meet her again
With those romantic feelings
To heartily express.
I dreamt of her sweet face
With her waving silky hair
Enshrouding my vivid colourful soul.
With the hues of love all around,
The magical flowers bloomed
The quivering lips uttered
Soft whispers of belonging,
The deep eyes reached my inner self
As I stepped in front
Of the silent grave.
A tiny droplet of water touched my arm
And depicted my deep passion
With the crumbled petals of rose
Lying in my palm
That was never given ever,
Till she walked away,
To cross the doors of paradise
Leaving a solitary soul with moist eyes,
Longing forever to view
Her picturesque smile,
And dropping a lover's tears
To reach heaven.

Copyright © 2012 Indranil Bhaduri

Submitted: Tuesday, September 25, 2012
Edited: Tuesday, September 25, 2012


Read this poem in other languages

This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.

I would like to translate this poem »

word flags

What do you think this poem is about?

Comments about this poem (End of Existence by Indranil Bhaduri )

Enter the verification code :

  • Matt Mooney (11/16/2012 5:42:00 PM)

    Brilliant. This the heart's core stuff-as beautiful as your roses.10.

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Hazel Durham (10/27/2012 7:47:00 AM)

    So beautiful and heart-rending poem with such deep emotions for the loss of your loved one. Brilliant write! !

  • A B (10/6/2012 4:31:00 AM)

    a v gud poem n well written.................crumbled petal of rose lying in my palm...v touchy

  • Samithree Rajapaksha (10/5/2012 11:33:00 AM)

    awesome and something deep.. a great writing...

  • So Close (10/4/2012 9:39:00 AM)

    you expressed the feeling of missing someone very fantastic ly and great work..

    »so close«

  • Naida Nepascua Supnet (10/4/2012 8:06:00 AM)

    you have nice reviews of this poem
    maybe because you wrote it with all your heart and the words burst with your emotions
    congratulations

  • Catherine Agunat (10/1/2012 9:09:00 AM)

    I love the essence, so touching. Well done Sir!

  • Sridatta Gupta (9/30/2012 10:22:00 PM)

    loved it. miniscule thoughts given magnanimous form.loved it.

  • Minali Saikia (9/29/2012 3:22:00 AM)

    A very swt nice and touching poem..
    elegant poem i must say...

  • Brian Markey (9/28/2012 4:00:00 AM)

    Hi Indranil,

    a very loving poem about the frailties of life itself, we will all live and ultimately die but it's what's in between that sustains us throughout our lives along with the many memories we have to cherish.
    Life and death are what make us who we are as they are the ultimate experiences we come across daily, they show up our strengths as well as our weaknesses.
    If you have faith in your God you need never fear lifes trials and tribulations.
    Good Luck and God Bless.

    Bri Mar

Read all 19 comments »
[Hata Bildir]