Tears Poem by Akhtar Jawad
Tears
I never knew many powers you have,
In the lovely eyes mighty showers you have.
I remember the day and the painful clove,
But the cloud that arose from ocean of love,
It rained on the soil with lightning and thunders,
Thunders that reminded me my own blunders,
Couldn't peep inside through your deep brown eyes,
My sight could not slip from the silky skies,
I was looking for stars in the dusk of hairs,
And the dawn was waiting at the downstairs,
Lightning that gave a glimpse of the rays,
Your eye brows are the Milky Ways,
My eyesight now travelled on a way,
I now know what your eyes do say,
Tears have wet rocky pieces of the clay,
Dough is in your hands make an idol I pray!
Commendable work...much effulgent pictorial scaping ~FjR~
A very sweetly rhyming poem about the many impressions and emotions, a pair of lively eyes can produce! Delightful!
Just so beautiful O lover Romantic poet I came here after reading a translation of this by another lady poet some lady Banoo UR a wonder Sir at romanticism I wish I too will be a comparison some day one day not too far away... JA JANAABH ji
I remember the day and the painful clove, But the cloud that arose from ocean of love, It rained on the soil with lightning and thunders, Thunders that reminded me my own blunders, ....great great great........
Beautiful poetic expression, The lovely eyes of a lover, with her lovely eyes and the eyebrows are the milky ways - - . Thanks Poet Akhtar saheb for sharing.
My eyesight now travelled on a way, I now know what your eyes do say, Tears have wet rocky pieces of the clay, Dough is in your hands make an idol I pray!
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4/19/2024 7:53:31 AM # 1.0.0.1119
A beautiful poem............................10