Teach Me Your Ways Poem by Reshma Ramesh

Teach Me Your Ways

Rating: 3.6


Teach me your ways oh! mighty Rivers
how you course so blithely?
You neither quetch about
the sharp stone you tread on
nor about the torrential waterfalls
you reach your destination certainly.


Teach me your ways oh! mighty Mountains
how you ascent the sky so steadily?
You never complain of the heights
or the bleak winds which blow relentlessly
you reach the stars bravely.

Teach me your ways oh! mighty Deserts
how you wait for the rain so patiently?
Neither complaining about the trapped heat
nor the way you are abandoned
you prevail and ponder peacefully.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sathyanarayana M V S 18 September 2008

This is a great thought asking nature to teach...in fact this poem has great philosophical depths and heights....very good poem.....

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Dr.Wardha Jawdat 19 September 2008

nature is indeed the best teacher..and you have brought that dictum to living breathing life...congrats on another excellent piece.

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Gi Galen 20 September 2008

Beautifully … poetic the world feel space…10

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Sadiqullah Khan 25 September 2008

A born poetess, , , , the tought is amazingly beautiful, , i am surprised, , a 10+

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rohit sapra 25 September 2008

This poem is really nice as it is very creative with strong emotions. The fluency is also great.

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 07 November 2009

a lovely poem on nature...its nature is truly a wonder..read my 'am not just a drop' on similar lines

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Adedolapo Olisa 01 October 2008

nice poem but u need to work more on your conclusion

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Robert Howard 27 September 2008

Very fresh and lovely. Nature has so much to teach us and your gracious poem helps point us in the right direction.

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 26 September 2008

Teach me your ways of writing poetry. Impressive.....

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Raja Basu 26 September 2008

Very rhythmic. Nice work Reshma.

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Reshma Ramesh

Reshma Ramesh

Bangalore, India
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