Tasty Sounds Whispered Poem by Chuy Amante

Tasty Sounds Whispered

Rating: 5.0


the sugary bliss
that springs forth
from your mouth
has a freedom flavor
when whispered
honestly
if it weren't for my tongue and nose
inhaling your quiet light,
I'd never hear of it
nor bask in its noiseless vision

Tuesday, March 10, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
sensory silliness inspired by Hafiz
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Adeline Foster 11 June 2015

Interesting format. Enjoyed this poem. Read mine - Who Am I - Adeline

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Amitava Sur 21 March 2015

Does it mean that Any wish whether a bliss or love cannot be accepted or felt if it is not received wholeheartedly, ie, through all senses of body and mind? ? If it is then it's very true.

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* Sunprincess * 11 March 2015

.......nice ink! ! ! ....a poem with sweet taste and sound...keep penning ★

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