Tanka Yellow Birds Poem by Eddie Roa

Tanka Yellow Birds

Rating: 5.0


Yellow birds fluttered
Atop the tall evergreen tree
A blur in the mist
Singing their morning prayer
I whispered Amen

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Noel Horlanda 13 October 2009

I'm some kind of a bird watcher, birds sings and perhaps birds prays too...beautiful

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Mark R Slaughter 14 March 2009

This is educational for me - I'd not heard of a tanka, so thanks for posting these poems. Second, I can see from you work how a short poem can provide such a powerful image and sense of being. Very well written. Mark

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Linda Moore 27 January 2009

You brought to mind a Beautiful picture, lovely.....10

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Eddie Roa

Eddie Roa

Manila. Philippines
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