Tanka: Cosmic Spark Poem by Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black

Tanka: Cosmic Spark

Rating: 5.0


Stealing Heaven's light

Nature's gentle touch in sync

sentient timepiece

two sides of the fluid force

God's magic is miracles /alternate line: God's magic are miracles..


Personally I like the sound of the first but is it grammatically correct? What do you think?

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