Tanka - Black Moon Poem by Lynn Kincade

Tanka - Black Moon

Rating: 5.0


A dark moon rising
mirrors despair upon the lake.
Black covers the waves,
smothering the winter light.
Drowning dreams of hope

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Christian Rivera 05 February 2012

Beautiful. I'm not really good at analyzing poetry, but this one touched deep.

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Hans Vr 23 January 2012

The dark night, mirrors despair, drowning the dreams of hope. Such a beautiful expression of feelings. I think this is a superb tanka, Lynn, extremely well written. A full 10

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Jerry Hughes 23 January 2012

...nice flow Lynn. Cheers, Jerry

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