*tanka 19: Boat Bobs Poem by Lillian Susan Thomas

*tanka 19: Boat Bobs

Rating: 2.8


boat bobs on a lake

creating round wrinkles

with a slapping sound.

old matron's face so placid

until laughter breaks the skin

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ray Schreiber 02 November 2009

Thank you...I really like this one.

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Ray Schreiber 01 November 2009

I really love this. please do me a favor and edit out the accidental 's' on sound(s) so I can add it to my favorites list in its intended form. (A friend should tell you if you have spinach in your teeth)

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