Md. Asadullah

Silver Star - 3,716 Points (11th july)

Tangible Beliefs - Poem by Md. Asadullah

Saw a wretched man
living in shacks__
His beliefs were very
soft just like wax__
Bought his beliefs
with bundle of rupees__
Took it in sunlight and
molded with ease__

Saw a gullible man
standing on street__
Cheated his beliefs
with language sweet__
His beliefs resembled
some old wood__
Sawed and chiseled
it the best I could__

Saw a strong man
holding his beliefs tight__
Forcefully took his
beliefs with a fight__
His beliefs were
like some metal hard__
To bring it in shape I
hammered and charred__


Comments about Tangible Beliefs by Md. Asadullah

  • Gold Star - 39,733 Points Aftab Alam Khursheed (8/10/2014 1:04:00 AM)

    Assalam o alaikum- - modern poem of all ages - - -tangible belief- -lovely poem you brought here thanks bhai (Report) Reply

    Silver Star - 3,716 Points Md Asadullah (8/10/2014 5:19:00 AM)

    Walaikum Assalam wr wb, thanks aftab bhai :)

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, August 10, 2014

Poem Edited: Friday, August 15, 2014


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