Md. Asadullah

Silver Star - 3,601 Points (11th july)

Tangible Beliefs


Saw a wretched man
living in shacks__
His beliefs were very
soft just like wax__
Bought his beliefs
with bundle of rupees__
Took it in sunlight and
molded with ease__

Saw a gullible man
standing on street__
Cheated his beliefs
with language sweet__
His beliefs resembled
some old wood__
Sawed and chiseled
it the best I could__

Saw a strong man
holding his beliefs tight__
Forcefully took his
beliefs with a fight__
His beliefs were
like some metal hard__
To bring it in shape I
hammered and charred__

Submitted: Sunday, August 10, 2014
Edited: Friday, August 15, 2014

Topic of this poem: belief


Do you like this poem?
1 person liked.
0 person did not like.

Form:


Read this poem in other languages

This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.

I would like to translate this poem »

word flags

What do you think this poem is about?

Comments about this poem (Tangible Beliefs by Md. Asadullah )

  • Gold Star - 39,733 Points Aftab Alam Khursheed (8/10/2014 1:04:00 AM)

    Assalam o alaikum- - modern poem of all ages - - -tangible belief- -lovely poem you brought here thanks bhai (Report) Reply

    Silver Star - 3,601 Points Md Asadullah (8/10/2014 5:19:00 AM)

    Walaikum Assalam wr wb, thanks aftab bhai :)

Read all 1 comments »

Famous Poems

  1. Phenomenal Woman
    Maya Angelou
  2. Still I Rise
    Maya Angelou
  3. The Road Not Taken
    Robert Frost
  4. If You Forget Me
    Pablo Neruda
  5. Dreams
    Langston Hughes
  6. Annabel Lee
    Edgar Allan Poe
  7. Caged Bird
    Maya Angelou
  8. If
    Rudyard Kipling
  9. Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening
    Robert Frost
  10. A Dream Within A Dream
    Edgar Allan Poe
Trending Poets
Trending Poems
  1. The Ocean Ballad, Mariah Williams
  2. Phenomenal Woman, Maya Angelou
  3. Daffodils, William Wordsworth
  4. Still I Rise, Maya Angelou
  5. A Dream Within A Dream, Edgar Allan Poe
  6. If, Rudyard Kipling
  7. If You Forget Me, Pablo Neruda
  8. Alone, Maya Angelou
  9. Nothing Gold Can Stay, Robert Frost
  10. The Road Not Taken, Robert Frost
[Hata Bildir]