Tale Of Mirrors Poem by Lakshmi Sreedharan

Tale Of Mirrors

Rating: 5.0


Once, on a bright sunny day,
A lady walked into my store.
Oh yes, my store of crystals and mirrors.
A lady well dressed,
In her late 30s I suppose.

I got to business,
“Yes ma’am, how can I help you? ”
“I would like too see some mirrors,
The finest ones of course! ” said the lady.
As asked for I went around my store
And put forward,
Two of the finest mirrors I had.

I displayed the first one,
‘‘Mirror of Egypt ma’am,
Well crafted as you can see.”
She took a good look of herself
In the mirror and said
-“Not right! Not right!
Can’t you see?
It’s not showing the glow of my skin! ”

Quite confused, I moved on
And put forth the second one.
“Mirror of Belgium, ma’am,
The best one in the world! ”
Once again she looked at herself,
“ Never! No! This one,
Is showing wrinkles on my face! ”

I stood there, not knowing what to say.
And she began –
“What store is this?
And the mirrors you have?
Finest you call them?
Finest indeed!
She walked away in rage

I did not utter a word,
I didn’t have the heart to tell her,
My mirrors never lied,
Her beauty was being washed away,
Away with age by time.

Before moving on with my business,
I thought –
‘Does beauty matter so much?
Which one is greater?
Beauty of the face or beauty of the soul?
Yes, A beautiful soul indeed!

The owner of a beautiful soul,
Can conquer many a beautiful faces…………..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Caterpillar MC 22 October 2006

good one lakshmi...theres a slight prose style...yet its a good one.

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Ashish R 19 October 2006

A good write.Welcome to PH. Ashish.

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John Tiong Chunghoo 19 October 2006

dear lakshmi, you should read slyvia plath's mirror and see how she tackle the same theme. yours is good too except you try to explain what everybody already knew. i commit the same mistakes too. write more and read more and you will soon be able to get rid of the cliche. sincerely, john.

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