! Take Notice Poem by Bob Blackwell

! Take Notice

Rating: 3.3


Pick a flower,

Smell the aroma,
it spreads widely
out of love.

See it’s beauty,
it gives generously
out of love.

Hear the hush,
it gives in silence
out of love.

Feel it’s touch
it give so gently
out of love.

Taste it’s essence,
it’s gives pleasure
out of love.

Sense it’s genius
to give love freely
out of love.

Learn from this.


25-05-2009

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ashraful Musaddeq 25 May 2009

Cute and excellent poem. I love it. 10+++

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Nkululeko Mdudu 25 May 2009

Yes flowers are some of the things that we need to take notice of, and this suggestion that they do everything out of love is a well refined one. good to read

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Sue Sie 25 May 2009

Never take for granted what Nature offers us...a Great poem 10++..............Sue

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a lovely write on the power of love the tiny flower is able to give..nature seems to be born for poets

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Kesav Easwaran 25 May 2009

You have beautifully brought the five sense organs into this write, Bob...eye/nose/ ear/toungue and skin... clever intelligent write on flower petals...10

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Anjali Sinha 08 June 2009

wow the aroma the beauty, the touch the essence, the hush, the genius ive learnt it all thanks dear Bob a wonderful lesson indeed a tenner from meeeeeeeeee anjuuuuuuu

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Sameer Ahmed 06 June 2009

A poem deifying all pure forms of love rendering me speechless with an example of a simple flower you used Mr. Blackwell. It is the human nature that we neglect such small things that can otherwise be very effective in generating good thoughts....10/10

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Alison Cassidy 06 June 2009

'Behold the lilies of the field, how they grow. They labor not neither do they spin. And yet for all that I say unto you, that even Solomon in all his royalty was not arrayed like unto one of these.' For some reason your beautiful poem brought back school days and this text. You're right. The beauty of the flower symbolizes that divine love which passeth all understanding (and I'm not even religious he he) . Inspiring write. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Sandra Fowler 27 May 2009

Flowers give pleasure just by being. They are indeed a symbol of unconditional love. Beautiful, Bob.10, of course. Warmest regards, Sandra

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Shashendra Amalshan 26 May 2009

yeah you v woven it so well indeed sir, a beautiful poem...spread the words of love and passion and make this site a heaven's book.. cheers 10+++

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