Take Me Poem by Dee Daffodil

Take Me

Rating: 5.0


Take me on wings
Yes fly me away
To that part of the world
Where dolphins play

Where beaches wait
Beneath the sun
For you and I
To have some fun

Take me now
I'm ready to go
I'll pack very lightly
Bring clothes? No!

Take me away
Let me escape
I need a vacation
I need a small break

Take me aw-
Knock, knock, knock..
Mommy are you asleep in there?
Pop!
Another broken daydream....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Michael Emine 15 June 2006

I'll fly you away any time my darling, as you know. Especially if you promise to write poetry about helicopters after the chopper experience. Sweet piece.

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A dreamy, funny, sweet piece indeed DD.

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Chuck Audette 16 June 2006

travel? well, you've got me grinning away... -chuck

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Duncan Wyllie 21 June 2006

This is very funny and the interesting style help make it so Love Duncan X

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David Darbyshire 22 June 2006

Go back to sleep carry on.................one of your best yet I think Dee..keep-em comin..Love dave xxx

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Ashraful Musaddeq 04 October 2008

10 for this sweet and cute poem. Lovely.

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Jimi Doyle 16 February 2007

that's travelling light...just a toothbrush! i like it

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Not a member No 4 09 February 2007

Sometime Dee, you're going to have to make that daydream a reality. You're only here once. If it's worth dreaming and writing this well about it, it has to be worth doing. xx jim

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Charley60 K 24 January 2007

Oh, laughing, this is cute. You know sometimes all we have is daydreaming. To dream that we can be taken away to have some fun to be fancy free and not have to worry about making another decision. I loved this and especially the ending. A nice write.

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Mpho Petrus Manwedi 25 September 2006

This will definitely make me come out of that lazy room which has been my comfort zone. Thanks Dee. I would also like to fly away with you

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