Take A Chance Poem by Anil Kumar Panda

Take A Chance

Rating: 5.0


I can see beyond the sky
When I am dreaming
You are flying as a fairy
With clouds golden orbs fuming

I can feel your touch
When I am not asleep
I can see love in your eyes
Those are blue as ocean deep

I can feel your breathe
When you are not near
You need to say something
Your fluttering lips make it clear

I can hear beats of your heart
When I throw a glance
Help yourself a visit to my grave
When you will get a chance

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aniruddha Pathak 02 November 2019

I can see beyond the sky When I am dreaming... And even yon of the universe when in love... A lovely song of love, dear poet

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Anil Kumar Panda 03 November 2019

I am glad you liked it. Sir. Thanks for reading and beautiful review. Regards.

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Valsa George 27 October 2019

When I am not asleep I can see love in your eyes Those are blue as ocean deep A beautiful song of love with a hidden sense of longing and a tinge of melancholy! A 10

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Anil Kumar Panda 03 November 2019

That is a very sweet and inspiring comment. Thanks very much and regards.

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Mohabeer Beeharry 19 August 2013

I like this poem all the way down to where you come to the grave. Gives me a shudder. On the whole it is a beautiful poem. Well done Mohabeer Beeharry Read my poems sometimes.

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