Tablets Of Sand Poem by Loyd C Taylor Sr

Tablets Of Sand

Rating: 4.8


I ran down towards the ocean,
Since the threatening waves were gone.
I climbed up on a massive rock,
Which stood firmly and all alone.

Then words of my life came freely
Flowing down to my writing hand,
So kneeling there by the ocean
I wrote them on tablets of sand.

Finished, I stood to consider
Just what my life's words had to say.
When suddenly the tide rushed in,
Washing them so quickly away!

On that day I learned a lesson
After watching this all unfold,
It was a story of my life
Of two ways it may be retold.

Did I write on the Solid Rock,
Which stands firm, knowing not a fear?
Or on the tablets made of sand
Where the waves make them disappear?

Monday, July 7, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: spiritual
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I have often watched the children building sand castles on the beach, laboring tirelessly for hours, only to watch a wave come in and sweep it all away. I thought how much this is like the way some people build their lives.

Then the words of Jesus came to me from Matthew 7 about the wise man and the foolish man.

Mat 7: 24-27 Therefore whosoever heareth these sayings of mine, and doeth them, I will liken him unto a wise man, which built his house upon a rock: (25) And the rain descended, and the floods came, and the winds blew, and beat upon that house; and it fell not: for it was founded upon a rock. (26) And every one that heareth these sayings of mine, and doeth them not, shall be likened unto a foolish man, which built his house upon the sand: (27) And the rain descended, and the floods came, and the winds blew, and beat upon that house; and it fell: and great was the fall of it.

I hope you enjoy, Loyd
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khairul Ahsan 17 January 2019

I've enjoyed reading and reciting your poem. I think, indeed you wrote it on the 'Solid Rock'. Hope to read some more of your poems.

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Galina Italyanskaya 07 December 2014

I enjoyed) And I think that it depends on your faith. If you believe in what you're doing, then you're writing it on the rock.

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 21 November 2014

on the tablets made of sand Where the waves make them disappear? but your writing will exist for ever as beautiful poems..

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F J Thomas 30 July 2014

I thought your words may have had that inspiration :) A beautiful way to set your own analogy Loyd

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