Syria 9 - Sonnet For Choosing Friends Poem by Danny Draper

Syria 9 - Sonnet For Choosing Friends

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Onlookers chatter in blood spattered dust
The basher and contenders spar and dance
On ruins and solemn graves pounded by both,
They size up and posture for what is right
Sectarian versus fundamentalist
Tribes summon vile, base spite across borders
Players ascend the stage to out-perform.
Audience gestures reels and weaves unmoved
Intent on taking part and outraged the
Industrial military complex pauses
Looks up from spying on its own good people
Seeks transparent secret meetings with players,
Winners chosen by empires' patronage
To emulate, or rebuild with freedom.

17/6/2013

Danny Draper

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
The world wants something to be done, but which side and which ally should they accept.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gajanan Mishra 16 June 2013

good write, thanks, I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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Heather Wilkins 15 July 2013

greed and power has taken over this world. a good read

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Walterrean Salley 06 July 2013

It’s hard to believe that this is life—something that was meant to be a beautiful, sacred gift. But in this finely-set sonnet, you have given a grave view of the true facts. Thank you much.

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Valsa George 25 June 2013

Peace has now become so obsolete! Instead of trying to restore calm from the shambles, contenders dance on ruins and graves! A very powerful write!

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Elena Sandu 16 June 2013

How painful feels the bleed of Siria. Wish we could sent our message of love and peace. To cry out for our children: please stop the violence, stop the killing, we are all sisters and brothers. What home could feel warm and cozy if built by war, painted with blood with tears fountains flowing from the walls?

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Dave Walker 16 June 2013

A great poem, sadly the world is run by greed so not much can be done.

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Danny Draper

Danny Draper

Kiama, New South Wales, Australia
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