! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ***synthesis / Quantum Light ***! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Poem by Dr subhendu kar

! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ***synthesis / Quantum Light ***! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Rating: 4.7


SYNTHESIS / QUANTUM LIGHT

dream seeks gleams of hope,
dawn reaches goal seeing to sun
warmth rambles over the dew
sparkle spruces its mortal skin

sky is bright steeping in love of rays
vastness is void redounding to blue
moonshine distills waves in ocean
desire bewilders spewing darkness

precision bestirs of completeness
summer cries by pain of inadequacy
green bustles by quantum of light
beauty covertly enriches synthesis

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Almedia Knight-Oliver 13 December 2009

You are an amazing poet! 'Dream seek gleams of hope; dawn reaches goal seeing to sun' all forms of life in the world seems to balance even in its dualism in mind and matter. great poem a 10+++

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Afzal Shauq 14 December 2009

precision bestirs of completeness summer cries by pain of inadequacy green bustles by quantum of light beauty covertly enriches synthesis well done dear friend..this is really a rich poem with many symbolic indicators..what i love in your poetry is the sweet composition of words and proper link or verses... well done..loved it.

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Tsira Goge 14 December 2009

subhendu, - Mystery of quantum romanticism. Very beautifully..10... Tsira

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Miranda Stoltz 14 December 2009

That was very beautiful. Great job.10.

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nature 360 15 December 2009

Congratulations; but the poem is above my understanding. Quite a mix-up of thoughts synthesized by the micro quantum mechanics as light.

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Rajkamal P.j 21 December 2009

I enjoyed reading...........thoughts flow like a stream..........very nice.......

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djean Whitney 20 December 2009

i really likes this thanks for sharing! ! Great write! !

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Ramesh T A 18 December 2009

Direct expressions of each one's nature is always welcome by all! A best way to express in poetry all things prolific and potential at once without elaboration is very nice indeed!

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Sarah Reamey 17 December 2009

I do enjoy the flow your poem has to it! Very Nice. 10++

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Yaci Pachenco 16 December 2009

like thee flow it has...

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Dr subhendu kar

Dr subhendu kar

Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India
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