Synchronization Poem by SALINI NAIR

Synchronization

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Mind prospect a nap that time
Body bends for its wish as a whole

Mind wake up in early dawn
Body swift for its fathom

Mind commands for rapidness
Body set momentum in turn

Mind rejoice in nature side
Eyes blink to that side in wonder

Senses command for tastiness
Body swallows to feed its thirst

Mind commands for freshness
Cleanse and odor for that time

Mind commands to rejoice
Ears keen and body bop at rhythm

Body the obedient slave of soul
Appeal that fulfill its way

Transit on its generous stamp
Disobedience grew on way

Once the feeble stop its track
Selfish pass it in search of new slave

Life is a conquest sometimes
As selfishness battle to self eventually! ! ! !

©2014 SALINI.S.NAIR. All rights reserved

Monday, September 22, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: body
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 22 September 2014

Very well composed on body synchronizing with soul on every occasion despite doubts and denials........Salini a tenner from me

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Akhtar Jawad 22 September 2014

Body the obedient slave of soul Appeal that fulfill its way Yes it's mind and formerly it was thought that our heart, the simple pumping device, sometimes stolen, sometimes broken, is now just a poetic idiom.

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Somanathan Iyer 22 September 2014

Mind caters always the needs of body even though the latter appears to be obeying! Yes both have a perfect synchronization.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 22 September 2014

selfishness battle to self eventually.....beautiful

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