Symphony In White Poem by Sandra Feldman

Symphony In White

Rating: 4.8


Tonight,
I want to write,
A poem that's all white,
No colors,
Just plain White,
The purity of flight,
The purity of sight,
The purity of height,
Eternal Snows,
Mountain white.

White peace,
White light,
White Dove,
Olive branch,
Of Love.

Upon a crystal lake,
A Swan starts to awake,
It's whiteness gently glides,
Like tears from saddened eyes,
A foggy, white wind blows,
The Swan, white beauty flows.

You are my dream in White,
Symphonic, great delight,
My Life that will take flight,
All Love was born tonight.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lyn Paul 08 October 2013

What a beautiful symphony you have created

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Adheez Van Der Beanthz 31 July 2013

beautiful, imaginative and creative you are a good writter, Sandra thanks for sharing

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Khairul Ahsan 23 July 2013

Upon a crystal lake, A Swan starts to awake, It's whiteness gently glides, Like tears from saddened eyes, So beautiful a metaphor! Sandra, you are just like the white swan yourself!

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Valerie Dohren 21 July 2013

The final stanza is just fine Sandra.

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Valerie Dohren 21 July 2013

Beautiful and very novel Sandra - an inspired and imaginative write from your beautiful pen.

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