Symbol Of Good Relation Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Symbol Of Good Relation

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I whispered slowly
The words were heard loudly
The wind added some magic
Soon it became as known music

I had sung beautiful praise
In her honor with slow voice
But her impact was seized by blowing air
Soon everybody looked around and stared

I felt shy and lowered head
My feeling was clearly read
I was not comfortable with disclosure
My beautiful love was now open treasure

“How will she react” I could not imagine
Why did I commit mistake to malign her?
I was sweating in winter time
The fear too had gripped sometimes

“So finally you make it known “she whispered
“Never mind, you do not own” she smiled
Sooner or later it was to be made open
Now you can write my name with golden pen

I had expected hostile reaction
But here she stood as symbol of good relation
“Smile and move with happiness”
She was in for joyous mood on face

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 November 2013

Awsome Faheem Jawaid4 hours ago Well written and beautifully expressed poem with innate flow in thought and in verses as well. I would appreciate your reviews of my poems Mr. Mehta. Comment 0 Very touching

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 November 2013

barbara greaves3 hours ago You never know until you try what reception you will get

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 November 2013

An opening up of a long suppressed feeling with trepidation of a back lash! Ancient Mariner3 hours ago There are so many times when we are afraid of expressing feelings that is always there lurking beneath the surface. This is one such time when after gathering enough courage the poet expresses his feelings for a love that may be the forbidden fruit that he is reaching out for! Or maybe an old love that he never expressed long time ago but when the paths cross again gets the strength!

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 November 2013

Cute! Mihaela Pirjol1 minute ago Cute!

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 November 2013

I whispered slowly The words were heard loudly

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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